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    Art for comfort from the pressures
    At the end of a tiring day , or a week or a year , there is nothing is nicer than to take a pen and write or to hold a brush for drawing and draw or to sit in front of your favourite artistic book or to look at a picture of the wonderful art to relax from the strain and the pressure .Whether was the situation is wandering in the corridors of a new gallery or buying a new picture or printing a picture which gives you the feeling of comfort . The art is able to ease from the acridity of the psychological pressures . In fact , your choice of particular artistic pieces which calm you and putting them in the more atmospheres/places which cause tiredness whether they are in the work or in your office in the home itself , you will find they help to relax from the daily pressures



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    Quote Originally Posted by diplomacy View Post

    Art as a comfort from the pressures of life

    At the end of a tiring day, or week, or year , there is nothing nicer than to take a pen and write, or to hold a brush and paint, or to sit in front of your favourite book and look at the pictures of the wonderful art and relax from the strain and pressure. Whether it is wandering in the corridors of an art gallery, or buying a new picture, or printing a picture which gives you a feeling of comfort... Art is able to ease you from the acridity of psychological pressures. In fact , your choice of a particular artistic piece which calms you and placing it in the atmosphere or place which causes tiredness, whether at work or in the home itself , you will find it helps to release you from the daily pressures of life



    please correct me if there are any mistakes

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