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    Could somebody check my CV?

    I've written my CV and i'm not sure is it without bads or something. Could somebody check it for me please?
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    Re: Could somebody check my CV?

    It's formatted as a picture; can you put the text up?

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    Re: Could somebody check my CV?

    Hi Tdol
    Sure here it is
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    Last edited by wafer1992; 03-May-2007 at 21:18.

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    Re: Could somebody check my CV?

    Tdol I've put the text up but i can't see your reply. If you find some time, please check it. It's very important for me. If there is still something wrong with attachment:
    R****** M********
    street B******* *
    05-*** Z*******
    Mobile: +48 0601 *** ***
    Telephone: +48 022 *** ** **
    E-mail: ***********@op.pl

    Personal information
    Nationality: Polish
    Date of birth: June 25, 1958 r.
    Place of birth: Lwówek Śląski

    Work experience

    02/2002 – 06/2006
    COMMUNE OFFICE
    Jabłonna
    Head of Geodesy and real properties’ Administration Department – making administrative decisions with head’s of the town authorization, managing the town’s real properties, planning budget, supervision of all works making in department

    09/2000 - 02/2002
    GEODETIC SERVICES
    Warsaw
    Owner of firm – management firm, winning of order, supervision and executing of works.

    06/1999 - 08/2000
    P.B. ECO Sp. z o.o.
    Warsaw
    Engineer of geodesist - preparing documentation of planned investments, agreeing upon of project, regulation legal position of grounds, preparing documentation for civil - legal use, complex geodetic attendance of investments in Warsaw (buildings at street Abramowskiego – Centrum, at street Dzięcieliny - Międzylesie at street Wąwozowa - Kabaty, at street Bukowińska - Centrum)

    05/1998 - 05/1999
    MILITARY TECHNICAL ACADEMY IN WARSAW
    Warsaw
    Technical scientific specialist – projecting of systems GIS

    08/1997- 05/1998
    PROVINCIAL OFFICE
    Tarnów
    Provincional inspector – supervision and control of basic territorial units

    11/1990 - 08/1997
    REGIONAL OFFICE
    Dębica
    Superior regional inspector – coordinating and supervising works related with foundation of database of record of ground and buildings in computerized information system.

    02/1988 - 11/1990
    COMMUNE OFFICE
    Dębica
    Head of Geodesy and Ground Administration Department – making decisions with Director’s authorization, administrating of commune’s real properties, planning budget, making reports, supervision of all works making in department

    12/1985 - 01/1988
    GEOPROJEKT GEOLOGICAL-PHISIOGRAPHIC AND GEODETIC ENTERPRISE OF ARCHITECTURE IN WARSAW LOCAL DEPARTMENT IN CRAKOW
    Crakow
    Engineer of geodesist – geodetic attendance of investments

    Education

    1985
    Stanisław Staszic Mining- Metallurgical Academy in Crakow
    Crakow
    Engineer of geodesist
    Professional entitlement 1, 2 and 4 in range of geodesy

    Additional information

    Experience in work related with real properties’ administration, knowledge of legal regulations from range of geodesy and real properties’ administration – statutes and these statutes’ executable acts, KPA, KC, law of procedure at administrative chancery, act about Leading Administrative Chancery, regulations concerning spatial administration of real properties, regulations concerning geodetic and cartographic law, regulations from range of public orders, personal data and non-public information, computer skills - proficient in work with Ms Office (Word, Excel, Access), liability, obligatory, regularity, engagement, communicativeness, ability of leading group
    Weak german language knowledge
    PS. Sorry for the mess I've made.

    Greetings wafer.

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    Re: Could somebody check my CV?

    street B******* *- Street...
    real properties’- Real Estate
    head’s of the town authorization- with the town council
    planning budget- budgets (or the budget)
    all works making- all works done by the
    winning of order-order
    Engineer of geodesist- Geodesist Engineer
    buildings at street Abramowskiego- buildings in Abramowskiego Street (etc)
    systems GIS- GIS systems
    with foundation of database of record- with setting up a database recording...
    with Director’s authorization- the
    geodetic attendance- ?? assessment??
    legal regulations from range of- delete 'from range'
    liability, obligatory- plural
    regularity- regulations?
    engagement, communicativeness, ability of leading group- good at communications and leading a group
    Weak german language knowledge- Elementary/Intermediate German ( you don't mention English)

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    Re: Could somebody check my CV?

    Thank you Tdol you are great. Your post were very helpful.

    geodetic attendance- ?? assessment??
    When I wrote geodetic attendance, I meant all services related with geodesy (for this investments). So which word is better?
    regularity- regulations?
    I meant, that I'm systematic , but I couldn't find properly noun.
    liability, obligatory - plural
    Here I had also problems with nouns and I meant I'm responsible and conscientious. So what should I do with it?

    I'll post corrected version of CV. Maybe you have more suggestions.
    R****** M********
    Street B******* *
    05-*** Z*******
    Mobile: +48 0601 *** ***
    Telephone: +48 022 *** ** **
    E-mail: ***********@op.pl

    Personal information
    Nationality: Polish
    Date of birth: June 25, 1958 r.
    Place of birth: Lwówek Śląski

    Work experience

    02/2002 – 06/2006
    COMMUNE OFFICE
    Jabłonna
    Head of Geodesy and real estate Administration Department – making administrative decisions with the town council authorization, managing the town’s real estate, budgets, supervision of all works done by the department

    09/2000 - 02/2002
    GEODETIC SERVICES
    Warsaw
    Owner of firm – management firm, order, supervision and executing of works.

    06/1999 - 08/2000
    P.B. ECO Sp. z o.o.
    Warsaw
    Geodesist Engineer - preparing documentation of planned investments, agreeing upon of project, regulation legal position of grounds, preparing documentation for civil - legal use, complex ???geodetic attendance??? of investments in Warsaw (buildings in Abramowskiego Street – Centrum, in Dzięcieliny Street - Międzylesie in Wąwozowa Street - Kabaty, in Bukowińska Street - Centrum)

    05/1998 - 05/1999
    MILITARY TECHNICAL ACADEMY IN WARSAW
    Warsaw
    Technical scientific specialist – projecting of GIS systems

    08/1997- 05/1998
    PROVINCIAL OFFICE
    Tarnów
    Provincional inspector – supervision and control of basic territorial units

    11/1990 - 08/1997
    REGIONAL OFFICE
    Dębica
    Superior regional inspector – coordinating and supervising works related with setting up database recording of ground and buildings in computerized information system.

    02/1988 - 11/1990
    COMMUNE OFFICE
    Dębica
    Head of Geodesy and Ground Administration Department – making decisions with the Director’s authorization, administrating of commune’s real estate, budgets, making reports, supervision of all works done by the department

    12/1985 - 01/1988
    GEOPROJEKT GEOLOGICAL-PHYSIOGRAPHIC AND GEODETIC ENTERPRISE OF ARCHITECTURE IN WARSAW LOCAL DEPARTMENT IN CRAKOW
    Crakow
    Geodesist Engineer???geodetic attendance??? of investments

    Education

    1985
    Stanisław Staszic Mining- Metallurgical Academy in Crakow
    Crakow
    Geodesist Engineer
    Professional entitlement 1, 2 and 4 in range of geodesy

    Additional information
    Experience in work related with real estate administration, knowledge of legal regulations of geodesy and real estate administration – statutes and these statutes’ executable acts, KPA, KC, law of procedure at administrative chancery, act about Leading Administrative Chancery, regulations concerning spatial administration of real estate, regulations concerning geodetic and cartographic law, regulations of public orders, personal data and non-public information, computer skills - proficient in work with Ms Office (Word, Excel, Access), ???liabilities???, ???obligatories???, ???regularity???, engagement, good at communications and leading a group
    Polish - native
    English - good
    Elementary German
    Best regards.

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    02/2002 – 06/2006
    MUNICIPAL OFFICE
    Jabłonna
    Head of Geodesy and Real Estate Administration Department – making administrative decisions with the town council authorization, managing the town’s real estate, budgets, supervision of all works done by the department

    09/2000 - 02/2002
    GEODETIC SERVICES
    Warsaw
    Company owner – supervision and executing of works.

    06/1999 - 08/2000
    P.B. ECO Sp. z o.o.
    Warsaw
    Geodesist Engineer - preparing documentation of planned investments, agreeing upon of project, resolving legal status of lots, preparing documentation for legal use, providing complex geodetic assistance for investments in Warsaw (buildings in Abramowskiego Street – Centrum, in Dzięcieliny Street - Międzylesie, in Wąwozowa Street - Kabaty, in Bukowińska Street - Centrum)

    05/1998 - 05/1999
    MILITARY UNIVERSITY OF TECHNOLOGY (WAT)
    Warsaw
    Technical and scientific specialist – designing GIS systems

    08/1997- 05/1998
    PROVINCIAL OFFICE
    Tarnów
    Provincial inspector – supervision and control of basic territorial units

    11/1990 - 08/1997
    REGIONAL OFFICE
    Dębica
    Senior regional inspector – coordinating and supervising works related with setting up database recording of lots and buildings in a computerized information system.

    02/1988 - 11/1990
    MUNICIPAL OFFICE
    Dębica
    Head of Geodesy and Land Administration Department – making decisions with the Director’s authorization, administrating of municipality’s real estate, budgets, making reports, supervision of all works done by the department

    12/1985 - 01/1988
    GEOPROJEKT GEOLOGICAL-PHYSIOGRAPHIC AND GEODETIC ENTERPRISE OF ARCHITECTURE IN WARSAW, LOCAL BRANCH IN CRACOW
    Cracow
    Geodesist Engineer – geodetic assistance for investments

    Education

    1985
    Stanisław Staszic Mining and Metallurgical Academy in Cracow
    Cracow
    Geodesist Engineer
    Professional certificates of 1, 2 and 4 grade in geodesy

    Additional information
    Work experience related with real estate administration, knowledge of legislation regarding geodesy and real estate administration – statutes acts, the Polish Administrative Proceedings Code, the Polish Civil Code, regulations concerning spatial development of real estate, regulations concerning geodetic and cartographic law, regulations of competitive tendering, personal data and non-public information

    IT skills - Proficient in MS Office (Word, Excel, Access) Polish - native
    English - good
    German - elementary

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    Katz is offline Junior Member
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    Re: Could somebody check my CV?

    Sorry I didn't do the corrections in bold, but you should be able to figure out what has been changed. I think it makes a more sense to me now. I would cross out your character traits from the text at all if I were you - the right place for them is in your cover letter. Good luck.

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    Re: Could somebody check my CV?

    BIG thanks Katz and Tdol, your suggestions were very very very helpful. I think now my CV is without any mistake. Thank you one more time

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