..Could you please check my report? Thank you very much!
The school where you study English is considering making improvements to the classrooms. You have been asked to write a report for you head teacher, making suggestions on how the classrooms can be improved.
Write your report.
To: The Head Teacher
From: Peter Petrov
Date: 16 June 2007
Subject: Improvements to the classrooms.
The purpose of this report is to recommend ways to make the classrooms more interesting to English learners.
- A TV in complete [delete - not required here] with a DVD/video recorder would enable students to watch a wide variety of English movies and educational programs, which would improve the studentsí ability to understand spoken English.
- A wide range of multimedia products such as dictionaries, interactive educational software, etc could be used in class if computers with free access to the Internet would be [were] also provided. Furthermore, on-line meetings with native speakers could be also [delete - unnecessary] conducted via the Internet.
- Visual aids such as tables, diagrams, graphs, etc could be placed on the walls in order to improve [to improve what?]and make the learning process more quickly ["faster"]. In addition, in order to make learning resources freely available, reference books should be kept in the classrooms.
- In order to make conversation with a teacher more natural and comfortable, school desks could be rearranged in a circle [in an arc (a circle would make it hard for the teacher, whereas an arc means the teacher can still use wall-boards)]]instead of rows.
In my opinion, these suggestions would definitely make the learning process more attractive and enjoyable, and it would also contribute to improving studentsí knowledge of English.