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    bosun is offline Senior Member
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    grammar correction

    Hello! I would appreciate it if you could correct any mistkaes for me . Thanks a lot in advance.

    We are doing internet business and theses days, too many ordering from customers make it hard for us to handle it.A few days ago, we heared about you that you are an exprect in the filed of fixing problems regarding a web server. I would apprecite it if you could give ua a helping hand for the installation of a web server. Pleae contact me at XXXX if you have any intererests.

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    Jason72 is offline Banned
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    Re: grammar correction

    We are doing [some] internet business and theses[these] days,[we have] too many ordering[orders] from customers [unnecessary]make it hard for us to handle it[which makes it hard for us to handle]. A few days ago, we heard about you[unnecessary] that you are an exprect[expert?] in the filed of[delete]fixing problems regarding a web server[web servers]. I would appreciate it if you could give ua[us] a helping hand[some help] for the installation of[on installation of] a web server. Pleae contact me at XXXX if you have any intererests.[If you are interested, please contact me: XXXX]
    Last edited by Jason72; 13-May-2007 at 13:06.

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    Anglika is offline No Longer With Us
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    Re: grammar correction

    Additional errors:

    heared = heard
    apprecite = appreciate

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    Jason72 is offline Banned
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    Re: grammar correction

    Thanks Anglika! Didn't see that.
    Gee, I have to put my contact lenses on.

    bosun, piece of advice:
    Hire some professional help when writting such letter in future, it may be late 'till you get a response.

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