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    Angry Urgently edit my conclusion

    In conclusion, technology has tremendous power to help students obtain and organize more information, and they can deal with complex tasks or assignments successfully. More specifically, with the computer and the internet, collecting data or information can be done only a single minute. In my opinion, I strongly agree that learning with technology provide learners with the meaningful learning experiences and skills. I believe that many more different types of technology will be developed and used to support and enhanced studentsí learning and understanding.

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    Re: Urgently edit my conclusion

    Quote Originally Posted by esophea View Post
    In conclusion, technology has tremendous power to help students obtain and organize more information, and they can deal with complex tasks or assignments successfully. More specifically, with the computer and the internet, collecting data or information can be done only a single minute. In my opinion, I strongly agree that learning with technology provide learners with the meaningful learning experiences and skills[ you have "learn" three times in this sentence - perhaps find alternative words for two of them?]. I believe that many more different types of technology will be developed and used to support and enhanced studentsí learning and understanding.
    Otherwise looks fine.

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