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    Please edit this letter

    Dear editor I would like to appreciate your effort and help during the last period. Iím asking you kindly to inform me about my paper status , where I respond to all comments that I received from you 4 months ago. While waiting you reply please accept my best regardsYours Hesham


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    Re: Please edit this letter

    k_hesham71 Dear editor I would like to appreciate your effort and help during the last period. Iím asking you kindly to inform me about my paper status , where I respond to all comments that I received from you 4 months ago. While waiting you reply please accept my best regardsYours Hesham


    Clarificiation please,

    Editor- Have you submitted a book or article to a publishing house?
    To whom is this letter written if not an editor?
    Last period- possibly last semester? (what period of time is this?)
    What type of paper, exam, thesis, essay?
    Four months ago an item was graded that you wrote, and you responded in writing addressing this person's comments?


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    Re: Please edit this letter (Clarificiation ) plz help me

    Clarificiation - This message for an editor of IT journal , where I submitted a scientfic article - By the period I mean the reviewing period - I just want from you to correct the grammer error in the letter and enhance its style to be more kind, pleas


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    Re:k-heshmam71

    K-hesham71- This is on the formal side, which I think will serve you better than an informal inquiry.
    I am still unsure re. reviewing period ( of the article your submitted? ).
    So, you can tailor this format to suit your needs.
    If anyone else on the thread wants to add something to this, please go ahead.

    Best of luck
    Beanfromex
    +++++++++++++++++++


    Mr. Jones
    So and So Scientific Magazine,
    Toronto,
    Ontario.

    Attention: Mr.Jones
    Senior Editor.

    Re: Inquiry of paper submitted.

    Dear Sir:

    Firstly, I would like to offer you my sincere appreciation for your time and all efforts on my behalf.

    Secondly, could you please inform me of the status of my paper I submitted four month ago.

    Once again, thank you.

    Yours,
    Type your name here
    Type yor e mail
    Last edited by beanfromex; 28-May-2007 at 15:17. Reason: typing error on/of the status

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    Re: Please edit this letter

    Quote Originally Posted by k_hesham71 View Post
    Dear editor I would like to appreciate your effort and help during the last period. Iím asking you kindly to inform me about my paper status , where I respond to all comments that I received from you 4 months ago. While waiting you reply please accept my best regardsYours Hesham
    Dear editor:
    I appreciate the help you have given me and your efforts on my behalf during the past few months. I am asking you to kindly inform me about my paper status, where I respond to all comments that I received from you four months ago. Please accept my best regards.
    Yours,
    Hesham

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