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Your favourite magazine is organising a writing competition this month. The prize is a three-day weekend in London, with a visit to a film studio. Write an article, describing a film that you have enjoyed, and explaining why you would recommend it to others.
Write your article (120-180 words)
The best film I have ever seen.
My favourite film is “Terminator 2”. It is a brilliant sequel to “Terminator”, which ["which" here refers to "Terminator" - you need to consider the logic of your sentence] is even better than the original, directed by James Cameron and with an outstanding actor Arnold Schwarzenegger in the main role.
Despite having [delete - not necessary] some similarities between “Terminator 2” and its predecessor in plot, “T2” is more gripping and describes a struggle between two cyborgs. A friendly terminator T-800 (Schwarzenegger), which [Again, you need to look at the logic of your sentence - do you really need this?] is sent from the future to the past to stop an evil T-1000 from killing John, the future leader of resistance [resistance to what?], and his mother.
The [Delete]“T2” is full of amazing and breathtaking special effects, so I would recommend it to spectators who would like to watch and enjoy computer generated scenes.
Another reason why the film should be seen is that it shows a possible way of mankind’s development in the future if machines and computers take over the power.
In conclusion, the reason why the film appeals to me is that besides fascinating special effects and fast-paced plot, it is also a warning to people who think they can control everything. This is one of the greatest films I have ever seen, and you should not miss it.
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