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    19.1. You wish to go for study to other country. You meet the coeval who lives there. Ask it about:1) An education system in this country;2) Opportunities of reception of higher education;3) Conditions of training
    Seven per cent of British school children go to private school called independent schools there are 2400 independent schools in London .other all state school in Britain are free, and school provide their pupils with books and equipment for their studies. About nine million children attend school. Education is compulsory from 5 till 16 year. At 11 most pupils go to secondary school called comprehensives which accept a wide range of children from all religions and ethnic. At 16 pupils take a national exam called G.C.S.E. after that student can either leave school and start working or continue their studies in the same school. There are entrance exam in universities and about 400 college and institution of higher education .the oldest universities in England are oxford and Cambridge.
    Universities and college of higher education accept student with “A “level student study for a degree which takes an average year of full time study. Generally, universities award two kind of degree: the bachelor’s degree and master‘s degree.
    plz don't notify about 2400 school and gsce exam just plz check grammar.
    10.1. You tell to your friend about the recent travel to the country, which language study:1) as you have reached to a place of your purpose, you used what transport;2 as long you there were also what was the purpose of travel;3) Your goals of travel.........................................
    I just returned from my trip to India was there on summer at my pen friend’s invitation. john did his best to make my staying at their home pleasant John ‘s family was very hospitable and his younger brother Jigs had a very good sense of humor people of India are some of the friendliest and most welcoming people I know wanted to see India as much as possible. There are many interesting and magnificent places to see. As I am interesting history we decided to go around Delhi. We took metro and we rent a car to make our trip easier and comfortable we gone to some interest places. One of the most beautiful ancient buildings is the red fort. It’s beautifully built with red marbles. it was made by the mughals who ruled India. In Delhi you also find a number of temples, the most beautiful of which is the lotus temple which is of the shape of a lotus. Also, there are lots museum which tells you about the ancient India like national museum. There are also many universities and educational institution in Delhi. We went on mountain climbing on Nanda Mountains. And when you’re hungry, there are plenty of restaurant, at all prices, serving you every possible type of cuisine’s hope to visit the city sooner and see this wonderful beauty again.
    20.3 Write the brief message on how you spend the free time
    I prefer to my spend time outdoor whenever possible. It is more interesting and relaxing than staying indoor. Being outdoor gives me the oppurnity to see sights, try new things and meet new people to go cinema, to theatre, to live concert. When I am outdoor, I have the oppurnity to see new sights might go to a park, go swimming, and take a hike in a new place. The flowers change with season to see .if I ‘m indoor I like to read books and plays computer and watch movie on net.

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    Cool Re: plz check my essay plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

    Good Essay, But Too Long You Should Cut Short It .

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    Hi,

    Your technical writing is very well. However, you still have a few mistakes about plural nouns and subject and verb agreement: "School" sometimes you used "s" other omit "s"
    -"There are entrance exam in universities and about 400 college and institution of higher education"
    I think you should put "s" for plural nouns here.
    You are great.

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