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    Srilanka has minority of Tamilians to whom they(the Srilankan government) considers Indians and exploits them. To rebel back the unjust done to them(the Minorities) by the Srinlankan government, the minorities formed a organisation called `LTTE'.

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    Quote Originally Posted by user_gary View Post
    Srilanka (usually Sri Lanka in English usage) has minority of Tamilians (Tamils) to whom [who] they(the Srilankan government) considers Indians and exploits ["they consider"/"the Sri Lankan government considers"] them [not necessary - delete]. To rebel back [against] the unjust [injustices] done to them(the Minorities) by the Srinlankan government, the minorities formed a organisation called `LTTE'.If these are the initials of an organisation, use the full title on first mention, and then use the initials - for example : "The new group was called the United Nations (UN). The UN has as its mandate...."

    Please correct my sentences.

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