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    wendy Guest

    Default Please tell me!!

    "I was on your Web site, and you have some pictures and videos of you guys partying like ******* animals"

    If I change the sentence like this

    "I was on your Web site, and you have some pictures and videos of your partying like ******* animals"

    1.Is it grammatical and not clumsy??

    2.Does it still have same meaning as the original??

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    Tdol is offline Editor, UsingEnglish.com
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    It's rather clumsy- it also means something slightly different- it suggests that the partying was probably a one-off event.

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