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    Hanka is offline Senior Member
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    Hi,

    could you please proofread the following sentence:

    Within the frame of the training programs, you will abandon the theory inside and get the practical experience outside.

    Thank you very much.

    Hanka

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    Anglika is offline No Longer With Us
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    Default Re: proofreading

    Quote Originally Posted by Hanka View Post
    Hi,

    could you please proofread the following sentence:

    Within the frame of the training programs, you will abandon the theory inside and get the practical experience outside.

    Thank you very much.

    Hanka
    "Within the frame of the training programs, you will abandon theory and gain practical experience."

    "inside" and "outside" - these imply some kind of activity inside and outside a room/building, but I wondered if this really was the case.

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