pls correct my introduction
I really need your help
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One word that people use to describeme is ‘HONEST’. Because of my honesty, people tend to trust me and I can maintain positive relationships with them. I would describe myself as a persistent person, especially with the right things, duties, and responsibilities.
I am a person who is not afraid of any challenge. As an oversea student I was supposed to confront various difficulties and problems, however, at the moment I am learning how to enjoy the challenge rather than becoming frustrated and giving up. My experiences (reinforced) ('helped' or 'taught' would be better, I think) me to build a positive attitude as well.
Sometimes, I behave unexpectedly, with my imaginations and behaviours, and I create a good atmosphere at work, so people call me a “humorous person”.
I have realized people are (enormously) ('very' would be better, I think) different when I lived and studied with diverse people in Australia. It influenced me to change my way of thinking and the way I see other people. I am sure (the ideas) ('my experiences' would be better, I think) will (influence) (repeating - try 'motivate' instead) me to provide positive encouragement to children.
That is to the first part, I have to leave now, I will try to get back to your texts later