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    go off, road vehicles (proof read)

    The police imposed curfew in our area, and all the road vehicles had to go off the main road.

    Please correct my sentence.


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    Re: go off, road vehicles (proof read)

    Quote Originally Posted by user_gary View Post
    The police imposed curfew in our area, and all the road vehicles had to go off the main road.

    Please correct my sentence.
    If you mean the vehicles had to travel on side roads:
    The police imposed a curfew in our area and the main roads were closed to all vehicles

    If you mean no one can drive at all:
    The police imposed a curfew in our area and all roads were closed to vehicle traffic
    or
    The police imposed a curfew in our area and no one was permitted to drive (their vehicles).

    Just suggestions!

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