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    Hanka is offline Senior Member
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    proofreading again

    Hi,

    could you please proofread the following sentences:

    1) If we win the necessary confidence and are allowed to work with you, we are obliged to come to the best result together.
    2) Here, the answer lies in the explanation of the meaning of work and responsibility to your employees.
    3) An exteral and independent service provider greatly benefits from being albe to give a realistic assessment of employees within a short period of time based on his professional competence.

    Thank you very much.

    Hanka

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    bianca is offline Senior Member
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    Re: proofreading again

    Quote Originally Posted by Hanka View Post
    Hi,

    could you please proofread the following sentences:

    1) If we win the necessary confidence and are (consequently??) allowed to work with you, we are bound to achieve the best result/s together.
    2) Here, the answer lies in the explanation of the meaning of work and responsibility (to) toward your employees.
    3) An exteral ? and independent service provider greatly benefits from being albe to give a prompt and realistic assessment of the/his employees, based on (his) professional competence.

    Thank you very much.

    Hanka
    my ideas..
    prompt means fast, or within shortest time
    Last edited by bianca; 22-Jun-2007 at 19:37.

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