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  1. #1
    Fleur de mort Guest

    Exclamation correct my mistakes

    could any one correct grammars in this :

    the love seems on him .. but he is hardest
    he looks in my eyes and makes himself forget
    in middle of the all world he touch my feeling


    the hardest


    he makes me tired and all cause is my missing eye
    when I see him.. the longing come back to me
    and i'm running to him and i'm thought the nostalgia never seems on my self and my face
    but I explored my heart when it gone to him before my body and I lost it between my hand


    the hardest


    the hardest

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    Super Sonic is offline Member
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    Default Re: correct my mistakes

    Say:
    He touches my feeling(s)
    Say:
    The longing comes back to me.
    (I can barely read the gray print.)

    ~R

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    Quote Originally Posted by RonBee View Post
    Say:
    He touches my feeling(s)


    Say:
    The longing comes back to me.


    (I can barely read the gray print.)


    ~R


    WoW
    2 mistakes in my writing
    this a great job yeah i'm better than my past days
    thanks a lot


    (I can barely read the gray print.)


    oh when i used red color the moderators frustrated me
    and now i have change my manner and you give me point

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    Sorry. I didn't mean to suggest that you only made only two mistakes. Certainly, much of it is difficult to understand, and I can make no suggestions for changes if I don't know what you are trying to say.

    ~R

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