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    Default Help needed ASAP PLZZZZZZZZZZZZ

    Hey,
    Plzzzzzzzzzzzzz correct the following asap coz i have to submitted soon,

    During the past three years I have been studying Information Technology at Groep-t "The English group". I have been graduated this year with very good grades. I scored very good grades in my first and second year as well , the reason why I am encouraged and optimistic about enrolling in the engineering program.
    Furthermore, I have been working full- and part- time in Marketing, Hardware support and the last 3 years and currently Im working part- time for **** As ****.


    Thx in advance
    Mike

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    hi Mike,
    here's your corrected version:-

    During the past three years, I have been studying Information Technology at Groep-t "The English group". I graduated this year with very good grades and also I have very good grades in my first and second year. That's the reason why I am being encouraged and optimistic about enrolling in the engineering program.
    Furthermore, I have been working both full-time and part-time in Marketing, Hardware support for the last 3 years and currently Im working part- time for **** As ****.

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    Default Re: Help needed ASAP PLZZZZZZZZZZZZ

    thank you a lot niluferauladin
    Mike

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    "I graduated this year with very good grades" does not mean that you got good grades only in your last year but the whole time.

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    Default Re: Help needed ASAP PLZZZZZZZZZZZZ

    Quote Originally Posted by mike009 View Post
    Hey,
    Plzzzzzzzzzzzzz correct the following asap coz i have to submitted soon,
    Say:
    Please correct the following, because I have to submit it soon.
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