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    In the speech, though I controlled myself at the outset, I lost my temper gradually and my speech descended into a rant against the government.


    Please correct my sentence.

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    Quote Originally Posted by user_gary View Post
    In the speech, though I controlled myself at the outset, I lost my temper gradually and my speech descended into a rant against the government.


    Please correct my sentence.
    During my speech, although I managed to keep a lid on my emotions in the first place, I was gradually losing the grip on myself, and as I was finishing off I took a pot shot at the government.

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    Quote Originally Posted by user_gary View Post
    In my speech, though I controlled myself at the outset, I lost my temper gradually and it descended into a rant against the government.


    Please correct my sentence.
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    I prefer keeping the word rant.

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