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    Default Which one is better

    I wonder which of the sentences is more natural (correct) from English nativesí point of view and why. English is not my native language. Any help will be appreciated.


    1.The company has emphasized extending items selection and improving manufacturing facilities.




    2.The company is going to expand the assortment and develop its production facilities

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    Anglika is offline No Longer With Us
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    Default Re: Which one is better

    Welcome to the forums!

    1.The company has emphasized extending items selection and improving manufacturing facilities.
    2.The company is going to expand the assortment and develop its production facilities

    I would phrase this:

    The company is proposing to expand its product base and improve its manufacturing and production facilities.

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