..Now i am preparing for my O lever Exam.
This is my exercise question.
Write a letter of inquiry on part-time work that enhance you people skills in you r personal capacity.
How do i write this inquiry letter.
Below is my inquiry, hope the teacher can check with me, and point out the error. Thanks you for reply.^_^
NG CHUN KAY
Ang Mo Kio Avenue 5,
1 August 2007
Manager of Nokia Service
Nokie Service Center [Nothing is more irritating to a company than to have the name of the company spelled wrong in this kind of letter!]
2 orchard Road
#08-08 Wisma Atria
Dear Sir / Madam
Inquiry of Sales Assistant Part-time Work You enquire about something.
I am writing to inquire for the post of sale assistant, advertised in the Time Pager on 28th July 2007
I am currently a student who taken [has taken = finished = past tense/ is taking = still doing the course = present tense] the course of Electronic, Computer and Communication in Nangyang Polytechnic. For the last two years during weekends, I have been working part-time for Popular Bookshops as a sales assistant. The time I spent there improved my ability to deal with customers in a polite and friendly way as well as honing my negotiation skills and people skills. I am now seeking to further my experience in sales, and to expand my knowledge.
I would like to find out:
1. The job scope of this position
2. The time arrange for this position Do you mean the hours of working?
3. The terms of payment
4. Opportunity to be the customer front line
I would greatly appreciate for giving [if you can give me ] all the information that listed at above. I can be reached any time via my cell phone, 12345678. Thank you.
Ng Chun Kay