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    Centermall International's functions would include the following:
    1. Promote Centermall to major global corporations as well as emerging firms for Centermall listing.
    2. Promote Centermall to the leading stock echanges in the major markets to attract their listed firms to list in Centermall for further growth.
    3. Act as the "Exclusive International Listing Agent" of Centermall by identifying, recruiting and filtering those qualified foreign firms for Centermall listing.
    4. Attrack and guide foreign corporations to find the optimal local partner in China to draw joint venture opportunities.
    5. Attrack and guide global investors to place their investments in Centermall listed corporations.
    6. Help Centermall to become the premier stock exchange in Asia in reciprocal to SM in the US(for example).
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    Quote Originally Posted by YOJ View Post
    Teacher is this right?

    Centermall International's functions would include the following:

    1. Promoting Centermall to major global corporations as well as to emerging firms for Centermall listing.
    2. Promoting Centermall to the leading stock exchanges in the major markets to attract their listed firms to register with Centermall for further growth.
    3. Acting as the "Exclusive International Listing Agent" of Centermall by identifying, recruiting and filtering those qualified foreign firms for Centermall listing.
    4. Attracting and guiding foreign corporations to find the optimal local partner in China to draw point venture opportunities...in order to investigate.../...in order to take advantage of...
    5. Attracting and guiding global investors to place their investments in Centermall listed corporations.
    6. Helping Centermall to become the premier stock exchange in Asia in reciprocal to SM in the US(for example). equal to / on a par with
    ..

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