We usually "do" homework. If you change "making" to "doing", the sentence is fine.Originally Posted by Atesttaker
Change "will find" to "have found". We use the present perfect there because the blueprint has already been found but it is still relevant to the search for cures.2-Because genetic researchers already will find the blueprint
of the human genome, many scientists believe that cures to most of the major diseases will soon be found.
Change "too" to "so". The "too" version would mean that they are overly resistant. The "so" version means that they are very resistant. The pattern is [so x that y is true].3-Some native grasses of California are too drought resistant that they never need watering.
Again "so matriarchal that y is true".4-Some lizard societies of Sonoran Mexico are too matriarchal in nature that no males whatsoever reside in their communities.
Add an "s" to "organism" to make it plural. There is more than one organism.5-Ecology, the branch of science that deals with the connection between living organism and their environment, has evolved into a required course at many univesities.