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    Dear teachers, bellow are my board ''rules and regulation'' regarding banning laws. I need your helps to spot any grammar mistake I've done. I also appreciate if you can make some adjustment in order to make my rules and regulation sound more interesting.

    Thank you very much.

    Trouble makers voted out by YOU.
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    If you find any members who offensive (in any ways) YOU, as a member here, has the right to run a vote that seek other members to vote for this trouble maker to be out from this forum for good.

    Once the trouble makers are voted out, their ID will be ban and he / she will not able to login to any section. No chances given, no delay, no argues.

    Rules to vote out any members.
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    1) In order to prevent abuse of this feature, only Lord Members (>500 credits) and above are allow to initiate a vote, and case a vote.

    - Please set a credit of 500 when you initiate a vote.

    2) Voting period will run for two weeks. All votes will be close in exact two weeks. Any other votes that come in after 2 weeks will not be consider.

    3) Minimum votes has to collect (in two weeks time) is 20 votes.

    4) The vote is considered effective if more than 2/3 (from the total votes) of the members voted the trouble maker out.

    5) Once the result is out after two weeks, notify Admin with the URL.

    All decisions are final by Administrator.

    This is urgent. Thank you in advance.

    Itik

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    I'll start (sorry- it's very late here and I'm exhausted)

    If you find any members who offensive (in any ways) YOU, as a member here, has the right to run a vote that seek other members to vote for this trouble maker to be out from this forum for good.

    I'd delete 'who'
    YOU, as a member here, haVE
    to be EXPELLED from
    to CAST a vote

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    Default Re: Problem with my ''rules and regulation''

    Quote Originally Posted by ITIK
    Dear teachers, bellow are my board ''rules and regulation'' regarding banning laws. I need your helps to spot any grammar mistake I've done. I also appreciate if you can make some adjustment in order to make my rules and regulation sound more interesting.

    Thank you very much.
    Trouble makers voted out by YOU.
    ----------------------------------------
    If you find any members who offensive (in any ways) YOU, as a member here, has the right to run a vote that seek other members to vote for this trouble maker to be out from this forum for good.

    Once the trouble makers are voted out, their ID will be ban and he / she will not able to login to any section. No chances given, no delay, no argues.
    If you find that any member is offensive (in any way), YOU, as a member here, have the right to call a vote that allows members to vote on the expulsion of the offensive member.

    Once a trouble-maker is voted out, his/her ID will be banned and he/she will be unable to log in to any section. There will be no second chances, no delays, no arguments, and no appeals.


    Rules to vote out any members.
    ===================

    1) In order to prevent abuse of this feature, only Lord Members (>500 credits) and above are allow to initiate a vote, and case a vote.

    - Please set a credit of 500 when you initiate a vote.

    2) Voting period will run for two weeks. All votes will be close in exact two weeks. Any other votes that come in after 2 weeks will not be consider.

    3) Minimum votes has to collect (in two weeks time) is 20 votes.

    4) The vote is considered effective if more than 2/3 (from the total votes) of the members voted the trouble maker out.

    5) Once the result is out after two weeks, notify Admin with the URL.

    All decisions are final by Administrator.Rules to vote out any member.
    ===================
    1) In order to prevent abuse of this process, only Lord Members (>500 credits) and above are allow to initiate a vote or cast a vote. [Is there a level above Lord Member or is the "and above" part of the 500 credits]

    - Please set a credit of 500 when you initiate a vote. [I don't understand "set" a credit.]

    2) The voting period will run for exactly two weeks. No votes that are cast after that period will be considered.

    3) Expulsion of a member will require a 2/3 majority of the votes cast. A minimum of 20 votes will be required for expulsion of a member.

    4) Once the result is out after two weeks, notify Admin with the URL.

    All decisions are final by Administrator.

    [I don't understand this last part]

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    Thank you very much to both of you. I really appreciate your helps.

    Can I donate something to this site? buy a book or anythings?

    Thank you again


    Bye
    itik

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    ''Rules to vote out any member''

    Sorry that was a mistake (typo).

    Thank you
    itik

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    Please donate questions.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ITIK
    Thank you very much to both of you. I really appreciate your helps.

    Can I donate something to this site? buy a book or anythings?

    Thank you again


    Bye
    itik
    You're very welcome. Your thank you is sufficient.

    I asked you some questions in my revision. I don't think it is quite finished.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ITIK
    Can I donate something to this site? buy a book or anythings?
    Thank you for your kind offer. If you wanted to help this site, why don't you tell all your friends about us (if they are interested in the English language). A website is nothing without it's visitors.

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