Would You be sow kind to read this letter and respond me if it's right or wrong (grammar and everything) Thank you for your time and consideration.
I am writing to ask for your assistance with starting the Immigration to Winnipeg and joining the local Jewish Community.
I hope me and my family are eligible to apply under the Community Support Priority Stream.
I'm 36. I hold a bachelor's degree in economics from The Hebrew University of Jerusalem and over 10 years working experience as economist and Information Systems officer in wide range of enterprises: small-medium to large-scale.
My wife, Sonya (32) is authorized Shiatsu Therapist. We have two daughters: 10 years old and newborn.
We got married in Israel, but originally have separately emigrated from the former USSR in 1990 (Sonya from Moscow and me from Kiev).
Now, after we have built our life in Israel, we took the decision to make a change and relocate to Canada. We intend to continue our professional carriers in Manitoba and we hope to find here the life values we are looking for.
I would appreciate your sending me the necessary forms and information.
Thank you for your time and consideration,
I need some advice.~R
You're welcome. Come back soon.