My address without name
27th August 2007
Dear Mr. Flode, ((should I write Dr. Flode instead?? - yes))
I am writing in response to your request to provide a reference for John Kino to be accepted in --- College.
Having completed the course is it a course or a program? to me, a course is one class that is part of an overall program myself during the last academic year, I know that John has all of the qualities that [, from my point of view ((or standpoint, which is better?)) - point of view is the better of the two, but I would delete it] would help him to complete the whole three-year course if he were to be admitted in the faculty ((remote possibility in order not to seem arrogant?? If he were to be is fine)).
John is an admirable person who was doing volunteer work in Rwanda for a whole year in 2006. As a result is more natural to me of this amazing experience, he possess an instinct for adaptation. This will help him learn English, quickly achieving the desirable fluently in spite of his current modest level of proficiency.
Sorry -I'm out of time. I will try to come back to add more comments.