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    how can I do it? (rewrite)

    hello!

    i must do rewrite this sentence and i made that and is it right or are there another choices? thanks

    He lives near his office, so she doesn't spend much time travelling to work.

    If he didn't live near his office he'd spend a lot of time travelling


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    Re: how can I do it? (rewrite)

    Quote Originally Posted by Crocus_ View Post
    hello!

    I must rewrite this sentence and I've done it. Is it right or are there other choices? thanks

    He lives near his office, so he doesn't spend much time travelling to work.

    If he didn't live near his office, he'd spend a lot of time travelling
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    It is fine.

    Another alternative:
    He doesn't spend much time travelling as he lives near to his office


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    Re: how can I do it? (rewrite)

    Quote Originally Posted by Anglika View Post
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    It is fine.

    Another alternative:
    He doesn't spend much time travelling as he lives near to his office
    Thank you very much.

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