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    Smile My interesting

    My interesting.
    Hello to all.Would you make some comments or corrections?
    Thank you very much.
    Humans enjoy from different things and they have different entertainments.It's possible that you enjoy a thing while I or another person don't like it or even hate it.This refer to psychological reason and different conditions that humans grow in it and their habits form in it.
    I have introduced in this text what I enjoy them.Perhaps some of them is very comic for you,this isn't unusual.
    I have many interesting but a mentioned some of them:
    1-I enjojy smelling baby dresses.
    2-I enjoy eatting milk with date.
    3-Some times I enjoy washing my legs with cold water.
    4-I enjoy smelling the dizel camion smoke.
    What kind of entertainment do you enjoy?You can list your interesting on a paper and read it any day and enjoy from the hole of your life.
    Best wishes and goodbye.

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    Re: My interesting

    Quote Originally Posted by haji View Post
    My interesting things [??].
    Hello to all.Would you make some comments or corrections?
    Thank you very much.

    Humans enjoy from [enjoy OR get enjoyment from] different things and they have different entertainments. It's possible that you enjoy a thing [something] while I or another person don't like it or even hate it.This refer to [comes from /derives from/arises from]psychological reasons and different conditions that humans grow in it[up in] and [which form] their habits form in it[delete].
    I have introduced in this text what I enjoy them[you do not need "them" here] . Perhaps some of them is [some=plural]very comic for you; this isn't unusual. I have many interesting but a mentioned [am mentioning] some of them:
    1-I enjojy smelling baby dresses.
    2-I enjoy eatting milk with dates.
    3-Sometimes I enjoy washing my legs with cold water.
    4-I enjoy smelling the dizel camion smoke. [the smell of diesel from lorries/trucks]

    What kind of entertainment do you enjoy? You can list your interesting things on a paper and read it any day and enjoy from the hole [for the whole] of your life.

    Best wishes and goodbye.
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