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    Default I need help on how to summarize, please!

    Mini essay: thinking about beauty

    Please, Ive been practicing summarizing and I would appreciate it if somebody would help me to improve this little one Im posting. I know it is difficult to know if its ok without the original text but Im more worried about grammatical and style correction. What do you think about this little writing? Thank you everybody!



    Despite the existence of relative beauty the authentic one is fundamental in the Earth. Besides, although beauty can be affected by clichs the real one is generally accepted and should be appreciated in its natural environment.

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    Anglika is offline No Longer With Us
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    Default Re: I need help on how to summarize, please!

    Despite the existence of relative beauty the authentic one is fundamental in the Earth. Besides, although beauty can be affected by clichs the real one is generally accepted and should be appreciated in its natural environment.

    It is fundamentally grammatically ok, but it does not make a great deal of sense. What do "the authentic one" and "the real one" refer to?

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