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    Hi there,
    Please proofread the following sentence

    Refusing to listen to others' advice is hardly worthwhile sometimes because you may taste failure.

    peter

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    Default Re: worthwhile

    You are trying to cram too much into one sentence.

    Why don't you break your thoughts into smaller bites?

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