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    Default i need some tips for writing skill

    Hello ladies and gentelmen..
    U KNOW .. this is my first participation here in this forum...
    it won't by the last ...
    well.. i got a question ..
    I wrote a long sentence but i don't know wether it is correct or not?
    My sentence is :

    "Days and days passed.
    this goverment spreaded, ruled the world, and publicized justice in th universe."

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    Default Re: i need some tips for writing skill

    Quote Originally Posted by Anonymous
    Hello ladies and gentelmen..
    U KNOW .. this is my first participation here in this forum...
    it won't by the last ...
    well.. i got a question ..
    I wrote a long sentence but i don't know wether it is correct or not?
    My sentence is :

    "Days and days passed.
    this goverment spreaded, ruled the world, and publicized justice in th universe."
    Days and days passed. (one sentence)
    This government expanded, ruled the world, and spread justice throughout the universe. (second sentence)

    It would seem that the second set of actions took longer than days and days. :wink:

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