That's pretty good.Originally Posted by Atesttaker
I am not sure what a professional attitude is. Can you write three paragraphs about that? Classically, the major reasons for one to pursue a university eduction are to acquire the knowledge a skills necessary for success in a particular field (acquire knowledge for a purpose) or to expand one's knowledge in general and to grow personally (personal enhancement). Both are likely to occur.2. Topic: Students attend a university or college for a variety of reasons. In your opinion,
what should be the main purpose of a university education?
Thesis:The purpose of the education is to equip the student with professional attitude.
That's good. Place a "the" before "kindness".3. Topic: When many people think of the United States, words such as independent and
free-spirited come to mind. If you had to describe your country by its personality, what
trait(s) would best describe it?
Thesis:My country is well known for its hospitality and kindness of its people.
How about: One should try to understand the essence of a new culture and adapt to it to the extent that it does not contradict one's own core values.4. Topic: Most people experience at least some degree of culture shock when they are
getting accustomed to a new culture. What advice would you give to a friend of yours to
help him get over culture shock? (You may write about your own culture or about the
Thesis:My friend should try to learn the essential values of the new culture and then implent them as
long as they do not contradict severly to his own culture.
One cannot achieve success in one's life without some degree of wealth.5. Topic: It is necessary to be wealthy in order to be successful. Do you agree with this
statement? Why or why not?
Thesis:One can not achieve one's success in life without wealth.
I softened your statement just a little. That would be a bit easier to argue.