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    Liberal approaches to modernization are closely linked to economic globalization.



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    Liberal approaches (leading) to modernization are tightly related to economic globalization.

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    Re: Liberal approaches to modernization

    Quote Originally Posted by angliholic View Post
    Liberal approaches to modernization are closely linked to economic globalization.



    The following is what I paraphrase the above statement; correct me if I am wrong. Thanks.

    Liberal approaches (leading) to modernization are tightly related to economic globalization.
    Hi, angliholic!

    Both sentences are correct.

    Liberal approaches leading to modernization are tightly related to economic globalization.

    Liberal approaches to modernization are closely linked to economic globalization.

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    Here is a quick observation regarding your request for assistance.

    The following is what I paraphrase the above statement; correct me if I am wrong. Thanks.

    I would recommend the following: I am paraphrasing the above statement. Please let me know what corrections, if any, need to be made. Thank you.

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    Re: Liberal approaches to modernization

    Quote Originally Posted by amigos4 View Post
    Hi, angliholic!

    Both sentences are correct.

    Liberal approaches leading to modernization are tightly related to economic globalization.

    Liberal approaches to modernization are closely linked to economic globalization.

    ____________

    Here is a quick observation regarding your request for assistance.

    The following is what I paraphrase the above statement; correct me if I am wrong. Thanks.

    I would recommend the following: I am paraphrasing the above statement. Please let me know what corrections, if any, need to be made. Thank you.
    Thank you, Amigos, for your correction and your help.
    I get it now.

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