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    Mr.
    Academic Vice-President
    Ateneo de Naga University




    Dear Mr.


    Primum Regnum Dei!

    My name is Suzain Aguilar taking up BSBA major in Business Management and a graduating student. I am writing in request for you to allow me to take more than the allowable load of subject units this second semester school year 2007-2008.

    I still have 34 subjects units left for me to be able to graduate this coming March 2008. That is why I am requesting for your approval to allow me to take 34 subject units this semester.

    I am optimistic and will always be appreciative of your approval of my request.

    Thank you very much!




    Sincerely,




    Suzain P. Aguilar



    Noted by:


    Ms. Debbie Adriano
    Department Chairperson
    College of Commerce

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    Default Re: Please tell me if there is something wrong or missing in my request letter

    Mr.
    Academic Vice-President
    Ateneo de Naga University




    Dear Mr. add name


    Primum Regnum Dei! don't use exclamation marks in formal writing

    My name is Suzain Aguilar I can see this at the bottom of the page- delete taking up BSBA major in Business Management and a graduating student. I am writing in request for you to allow me to take more than the allowable load of subject units this second semester school year 2007-2008.

    I am writing to request permission to take more subject units than are permitted this semester...

    I still have 34 subjects units left for me to be able to graduate this coming March 2008. That is why I am requesting your approval to allow me to take 34 subject units this semester.

    Thanking you in advance, I look forward to hearing from you.






    Sincerely,




    Suzain P. Aguilar



    Noted by:


    Ms. Debbie Adriano
    Department Chairperson
    College of Commerce

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