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    Default Just the last part of my essay! Give me a hand please

    Hello teachers, I am writting a essay, this is the last paragraph and I do not have enough confidence.Please take a lookat it!

    Currently, I am working in a research paper based on my Master thesis dissertation. My plan is to continue with research which I have been involved in the past two years. I plan to continue with a doctoral research on “An Ethnographic Research of Peruvian Female in Japan: Social and cultural changes in the Migration Process”.From my master research I founded that Peruvian families living in Japan have significantly changed their relationships and responsibilities within the household members. The situation in most cases is the result from their focus on financial savings, which compels parents to work more hours per day and remain in the factories during all day. The circumstances in which Peruvians do not balance correctly their time inside and outside the household have originated a serious gap with their children. In this sense, my study will significantly focus on the Peruvian female, her adaptation, her challenges and responses to a new environment. My research will focus on the analysis and evolution of her ethnic self-identification after living in Japan for some years. I consider that the new dynamics for female Peruvians which exhibit diverse qualities, such as more independence from the household work and high contribution to the family’s economy have significantly modified the traditional gender roles. Peruvian women in Japan are creating a new type of Peruvian women which greatly differ from the traditional role that Peruvians wives have in the home country. A comparative analysis of Peruvians women in Japan and Peruvians women from the home country will help to better understand how females Peruvians are constructing their identities in different spaces and times, how social groups are evolving in the host country, and how they are developing their ethnic group perspectives.
    Finally, I plan to teach at the University level and my future researches will build upon my study fieldwork. Research projects will develop and continue with studies of ethnic identity, transnational networks, international migration related with education and gender.

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    Default Re: Just the last part of my essay! Give me a hand please

    Quote Originally Posted by yrmacita View Post
    Hello teachers, I am writting a essay, this is the last paragraph and I do not have enough confidence.Please take a lookat it!

    Currently, I am working on a research paper based on my Master thesis dissertation. My plan is to continue the research which I have been involved in over the past two years. I plan to continue with doctoral research on “An Ethnographic Research of Peruvian Female in Japan: Social and cultural changes in the Migration Process”. From my master research I found that Peruvian families living in Japan have significantly changed their relationships and responsibilities within the household. The situation in most cases is the result of their focus on financial savings, which compels parents to work more hours per day and remain in the factories during the day. These circumstances, where Peruvians do not balance their time inside and outside the household properly, have created a serious gap with their children. My study will significantly focus on the Peruvian female, her adaptation, challenges and responses to her new environment. My research will focus on the analysis and evolution of her ethnic self-identification after living in Japan for some years. I believe that the new dynamics for female Peruvianshave significantly modified their traditional gender roles. They exhibit an increasingly diverse independence from the household work and high contributions to the family’s economy . Peruvian women in Japan are creating a new type of Peruvian woman which greatly differs from the traditional role that Peruvian wives have in their home country. A comparative analysis of Peruvian women in Japan and traditional Peruvian women will help to better understand how these females are constructing their identities in different spaces and times, how social groups are evolving in the host country, and how they are developing their ethnic group perspectives.

    Finally, I plan to teach at the University level with my future research building upon my fieldwork studies. Research projects will continue to develop in the areas of ethnic identity, transnational networks, and international migration related to education and gender.


    I have highlighted and bolded by changes so they are visible to you. I hope this helps...good luck
    Last edited by Naamplao; 25-Oct-2007 at 03:45.

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    Default Re: Just the last part of my essay! Give me a hand please

    Naamplao,

    Thank you very much for your help. Yesterday I submitted my essay.

    Thanks again,


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