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Currently, I am working on a research paper based on my Master thesis dissertation. My plan is to continue the research which I have been involved in over the past two years. I plan to continue with doctoral research on “An Ethnographic Research of Peruvian Female in Japan: Social and cultural changes in the Migration Process”. From my master research I found that Peruvian families living in Japan have significantly changed their relationships and responsibilities within the household. The situation in most cases is the result of their focus on financial savings, which compels parents to work more hours per day and remain in the factories during the day. These circumstances, where Peruvians do not balance their time inside and outside the household properly, have created a serious gap with their children. My study will significantly focus on the Peruvian female, her adaptation, challenges and responses to her new environment. My research will focus on the analysis and evolution of her ethnic self-identification after living in Japan for some years. I believe that the new dynamics for female Peruvianshave significantly modified their traditional gender roles. They exhibit an increasingly diverse independence from the household work and high contributions to the family’s economy . Peruvian women in Japan are creating a new type of Peruvian woman which greatly differs from the traditional role that Peruvian wives have in their home country. A comparative analysis of Peruvian women in Japan and traditional Peruvian women will help to better understand how these females are constructing their identities in different spaces and times, how social groups are evolving in the host country, and how they are developing their ethnic group perspectives.
Finally, I plan to teach at the University level with my future research building upon my fieldwork studies. Research projects will continue to develop in the areas of ethnic identity, transnational networks, and international migration related to education and gender.
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