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    Do these make sense?

    Dear teachers,

    The following are the headline and subhead of my feature article, wonder if they are correct?

    CREATIVE and with DIVERSE TALENTS
    Teacher/song-writer/columnist shares experience

    Your help is very much appreciated. Thanks. :)

    Regards,
    Kenneth Lee

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    Re: Do these make sense?

    It makes sense, but doesn't sound natural. I would have said:

    CREATIVE and TALENTED (two similar adjectives)
    Teacher/song-writer/columnist shares experience


    The fact that the teacher is also a song writer and columnist shows that his/her talents are diverse.

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