You need to use past perfect in the first two sentences. Thus:Originally Posted by Latoof
- A student in her class had experienced the same tragedy. She had lost three members of her family in a car accident. Latifa looked at her friend and cried about her father until the end of the school day.
Originally Posted by Latoof
- From that day on, Latifa felt the loss of her father, whom she had loved very much, although she could not remember anything about him, even his angelic face.
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