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    Hi there,
    Can you proofread?

    In Wonderland, I like to play the exciting rides.

    pete

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    Default Re: rides

    Quote Originally Posted by peter123 View Post
    Hi there,
    Can you proofread?

    In Wonderland, I like to play the exciting rides.

    pete
    Hi, Pete!

    A person does not 'play' the rides at an amusement park; a person 'rides' the rides'! * When I go to Wonderland, I enjoy the exciting rides. * The roller coaster is my favorite ride. * When I go to Wonderland, I will ride the roller coaster. * At Wonderland, I like to play the games of chance that are designed for young adults.

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    Default Re: rides

    You can also say 'go on the exciting rides'.

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