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    Hi everyone,

    I'm training for GMAT. Here are some questions where my answer was not the right one but I didn't get any further explanations. The correct answer is in the sentence. I'd be glad if you could explain me why my choice was wrong.

    If I |would have known| about the team tryouts, I would have signed up for them.
    My answer : had been told

    Valarie claims that cats |make the best pets|.
    My answer : are the best pets

    The helium- filled balloon |rose into the air|.
    My answer : rose in the air

    During Colonial days, a |schoolroom| looked rather empty.
    My answer : school room

    Quebec |rises magnificently above| above the St. Lawrence River.
    My answer : rises in a magnificent way

    Jessica Mitford wrote The American Way of Death, a best-selling book, |which led eventually| to an official investigation of the funeral industry.
    My answer : that eventually led

    If the books |were cataloged| last week, why havenít they been placed on the shelf?
    My answer : have been cataloged

    My biggest interrogation lies in the first sentence. I didn't know that "would" could follow a "if".

    Thanks in advance,
    Mark

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    Default Re: GMAT Sentence correction

    Was this a computer test? If so, the first could be an error.

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    Well, I found the test on the Web. So, you agree on the fact that the answer they give for the first sentence does not seem correct, right?

    Mark

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    Yes
    2 We often talk about animals making good pets and individual animals being good pets.
    3 Rose into- it went from the ground, so it didn't start in the air. If it rose in the air, it would not have started from the ground
    6- Don't use 'that' as a relative pronoun in a non-restrictive clause (after a comma)
    7 When we are questioning the truth of a past event, we the past tense. The past perfect would be imagining the oppositie of an established fact

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    Default Re: GMAT Sentence correction

    Hi Tdol,

    Thanks for your reply. Though, I don't understand the problem in sentence 6. Could you please give me a case where "that" must be used? For me, the were rather equivalent.

    Thanks,
    Mark

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