Para 1- l5 home less- should be homeless
l6 New York- capital letter missing
Para 2 line 5- in- you've written n
Para 3 l2- should be 'stops'
l11 -'if' not f
Para 4- l1 one view, which is that homeless people are still homeless- this doesn't mean very much to me
Last line- The homeless may ask for our help, while some don’t
Some homeless may ask for our help, while others don't