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    Hi,
    I am writing an e-mail to my representative. Can anybody help me with proofreading this e-mail?


    Hi, Mr Jose,
    I talked to Sharlene today in the morning and I told her that I cannot visit to that place because it is too far from my house.

    Thanks



    Can anybody help me please?

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    Default Re: help for e-mail writing

    Hi, Jose, (only use the forename here if the letter is informal, if it's formal use Mr. (family name))


    I talked to Sharlene this morning and I told her that I cannot visit there because it is too far from my house.

    Thanks

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    Thanks

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    Default Re: help for e-mail writing

    Quote Originally Posted by sandykhattar View Post
    Hi,
    I am writing an e-mail to my representative. Can anybody help me with proofreading this e-mail?


    Hi, Mr Jose,
    I talked to Sharlene today in the morning and I told her that I cannot visit to that place because it is too far from my house.

    Thanks



    Can anybody help me please?

    (Dear) Mr. Jose,

    I talked to S. this morning and I told her that I couldn't visit her because she is/lives too far away from my house.

    Kind regards,
    ....

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