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    I am wondering if someone can improve the style of this paragraph. I feel that the structure is not strong enough.


    X inquired about when the students who graduate in the fall took the Y exam. Z answered that the current graduates took the test during this semester before the completion of requirements but it will become a standard procedure in the future to give the exam during the junior year.
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    Default Re: improving the structure of a paragraph

    Quote Originally Posted by thomasRavenelli View Post

    I am wondering if someone can improve the style of this paragraph. I feel that the structure is not strong enough.


    X inquired about when the students who graduate in the fall took the Y exam. Z answered that the current graduates took the test during this semester before the completion of requirements, but that it will become a standard procedure in the future to take/sit the exam during the junior year.
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