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The only way to improve is to practice and practice and practice. Vocabulary is learned through reading and listening. Read and listen as much as possible. Have a good dictionary and a notebook - when you meet a word you do not know, look it up and then use it.
You can always try out your English writing on us.
Basic rules in writing:
Each sentence starts with a capital letter.
Proper names [personal names/names of the months and days/company names/names of languages and countries] start with a capital letter.
One space follows a punctuation mark.
Learn to punctuate: http://www.usingenglish.com/glossary/punctuation.html
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