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    Smile as they become less and less expensive and installed with more and more practical bui

    Cell phone are becoming increasingly popular with people from every walk of life as they become less and less expensive and installed with more and more practical built-in functions.



    Is the above text well constructed? If not, how would you revise it? Thanks.

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    Re: as they become less and less expensive and installed with more and more practical

    In this sentence I'd omit less and less, more and more and find some adverb to stress what you mean. my advice is
    much more practical
    they gradually become not that much expensive

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