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    Smile Please read all the safety rules before using that product on your face.

    Please read all the safety rules before using that product on your face.
    Please read all the rules for safety before applying that product on your face.


    Which of the above sound finer? If neither, how would you revise them? Thanks.

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    Re: Please read all the safety rules before using that product on your face.

    Please read the instructions before using this product.

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    Re: Please read all the safety rules before using that product on your face.

    Quote Originally Posted by Anglika View Post
    Please read the instructions before using this product.
    Thanks, Anglika.
    Just to make sure, does "safety rules" sound right?

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    Re: Please read all the safety rules before using that product on your face.

    It sounds a bit odd if this is a cosmetic product. It would be fine if the product is being used for another reason [perhaps medical].

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    Re: Please read all the safety rules before using that product on your face.

    Quote Originally Posted by Anglika View Post
    It sounds a bit odd if this is a cosmetic product. It would be fine if the product is being used for another reason [perhaps medical].
    Thanks, Anglika.

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