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    Smile playing games makes you smarter and puts fun into your life.

    Whether you are young or old, playing games makes you smarter and puts fun into life.



    Does "puts fun into life" amount to "adds fun to life" and "fills life with fun?" Thanks.

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    Default Re: playing games makes you smarter and puts fun into your life.

    I don't like the sentence
    Whether you are young or old, playing games makes you smarter and puts fun into life.

    Better:
    Whether you are young or old, playing games makes you smarter and puts more fun in your life.

    edward

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    Default Re: playing games makes you smarter and puts fun into your life.

    Quote Originally Posted by baqarah131 View Post
    I don't like the sentence
    Whether you are young or old, playing games makes you smarter and puts fun into life.

    Better:
    Whether you are young or old, playing games makes you smarter and puts more fun in your life.

    edward
    Thanks, baqarah.
    I like your version, but I like to make sure if my suggestions are right.

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