Excellent article! I really enjoyed it and was very impressed by your imagination and humor. You make these idioms so much fun and full of colorful expressions. Also, you amaze me not only with your English but also your Chinese. I wish I can learn English as good as you. I know it is impossible in my lifetime, but I am willing to try.
By the way, I am afraid that a few typos which inevitably occur in the content of the essay. ..........
I hope I can speak English fluently when we meet again anytime, anywhere.
In a while, crocodile!
Last edited by Melody Hsu; 11-Dec-2007 at 00:32.
the only correction i found necessary was :
I wish I can learn English as good as you.
I wish I could learn English as well as you.
Your are well on your way to becoming fluent in English. If you hadn't pointed out that you are not fluent , I wouldn't have been able to tell. Keep up the good work!