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    That is why management's first decisions from employing the workers to developing a menu and prices is no joking matter.

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    Default Re: Proof read this sentence

    Quote Originally Posted by Unregistered View Post
    That is why management's first decisions from employing the workers to developing a menu and prices is no joking matter.

    Please proofread....

    You refer to "decisions" [plural] but say "is no joking matter". You need agreement.

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    By "employing" do you mean "hiring"?

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