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    peter123 is offline Senior Member
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    Hi there,
    I am writing a story and donít know this line is correct. Please proofread.
    Peter was very nervous because he had a test. When he entered the examination hall, his heart beat suddenly reach over 150 per minutes. He thought he was going to collapse.
    Thanks
    pete

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    Anglika is offline No Longer With Us
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    Quote Originally Posted by peter123 View Post
    Hi there,
    I am writing a story and donít know this line is correct. Please proofread.
    Peter was very nervous because he had a test. When he entered the examination hall, his heart beat suddenly reached over 150 per minute. He thought he was going to collapse.
    Thanks
    pete

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