it has been awhile since i m looking i looked for some site where some one ,defnltty definitely who has more understanding of English , can review my writing of my daily business life.
i m wrking in software and basically from mexico .. i am from mexico and work in software. i regualrly communicate, using email ,with my colleague , some time senior also . i regularly email my colleagues and sometimes senior. i feel that i defntly definitely have some improvement to make in email writing .
i would iike some one to see my writing below and suggest how to make it simple and more effective et etc.
All suggestions/comment are appreciated
here is what i wrote to one of my colleagues in an email today
Hi XXX ,
As required to support new "assignment_delete_ind" column in the assignment table,
(In the attached file )I have listed down all the affected queries ,along with required changes.
Please review these queries ,then I will change the code after your review.
the rest looks ok