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    Smile The overall sound of Change Me is smoother and more laid-back,

    Wang's latest album, Change Me, was released in July 2007. Change Me is indeed a change from the musical style of his previous albums. The overall sound of Change Me is smoother and laid-back.


    Is it proper to rewrite the bolded line as the following? Correct me if I am wrong. Thanks.

    The sound of Change Me is smoother and more laid-back overall/on the whole.

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    Default Re: The overall sound of Change Me is smoother and more laid-back,

    Since the original is comparing "Change Me" to previous recordings, you need to retain this comparison:


    The sound of Change Me is smoother and more laid-back overall/on the whole than Wang's previous albums.

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    Default Re: The overall sound of Change Me is smoother and more laid-back,

    Thanks, Anglika.

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