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    Hi there,

    Could you proofread the following sentences?

    When I reached my apartment building, I found a sewage pipe was broken and the sew spouted like a fountain.
    The maintenance team were busy with repairing it.

    Thanks
    pete

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    Default Re: apartment

    Quote Originally Posted by peter123 View Post
    Hi there,

    Could you proofread the following sentences?

    When I reached my apartment building, I found a sewage pipe was broken and the sew spouted like a fountain.
    The maintenance team were busy with repairing it.

    Thanks
    pete
    Pete,

    When I reached my apartment building, I found a broken sewage pipe. The sewage spouted like a fountain.
    The maintenance team was busy repairing it.

    Cheers,
    Amigos4

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